PITCH.

PITCH FEEDBACK

When presenting our pitch, our class gave us their feedback - below is both the feedback (good and bad) and what we aim to do to solve the bad things/answer any questions they may have about our music video plans.

THEY SAID:
"All looks good, how are you gonna get a smoke machine??"
WE SAID:
"Sam has a smoke machine, laser light and strobe light at her house, which is hers, and so we can use this."

THEY SAID:
"It looks good, but it looks quite normal, like not unique"
WE SAID:
"We wanted it to appeal to our mainstream audience as well as our individualists, and therefore we have incorporated that within our video, however it has got some unique aspects as well."

THEY SAID:
"I like how the dark theme runs throughout, it looks well thought out."
WE SAID:
"Yes, we got a clear inspiration from Ed Sheerans video and we have tried to link this to our video, in an effective way so the audience can see the theme throughout."

THEY SAID:
"The pitch was very professional, I liked it a lot."
WE SAID:
"We did it through Apple however we were very proud of it."


To get this feedback, we gave out some feedback sheets for people to fill out, an example of some can be shown below: